tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post1682115376262096527..comments2023-10-06T20:54:18.529+08:00Comments on zaty luvlianncezzz: seandai kau mengerti | Cerpenzaty luvlianncezhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-23302933034716365112011-04-29T10:15:56.174+08:002011-04-29T10:15:56.174+08:00walaupon citer ni menarik saye rase bley pecah ent...walaupon citer ni menarik saye rase bley pecah entry ni sebab saye mmpu baca 3citer je...faizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08663615431884255433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-3552085202180494522011-04-21T16:25:44.774+08:002011-04-21T16:25:44.774+08:00haha.nie sesedap rasa je tulis sis amanie.kui3haha.nie sesedap rasa je tulis sis amanie.kui3zaty luvlianncezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-69881675378559238162011-04-20T06:28:32.246+08:002011-04-20T06:28:32.246+08:00pnjg gila,tapi nice zaty..buat sndri ni?betul?hehe...pnjg gila,tapi nice zaty..buat sndri ni?betul?heheee<br /><br />*sy pun rasa mcm tu,bgus buat episod2,dan biar setiap episod yang akan dtg,zaty bagi suspen.so orang akan teruja nak baca lagi...<br />*kalau pnjg mcm ni,kalau orang suka bca novel,layan la ni..tapi klau oranh malas,dia kat je dia dah baca..hehehee<br />*tgk sy komen pun dah mcm nak buat novel pulak..hehee<br /><br />maaf kalau terasa,skdr pandangan sy,,Woofer Stormhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12215292394263487836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-54803164141625898202011-04-19T16:34:50.189+08:002011-04-19T16:34:50.189+08:00eii budak nie! cakap tak pandai! oke jek org baca....eii budak nie! cakap tak pandai! oke jek org baca. kalah org tau =.='Amanie Khairunnisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04298582641153892842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-42382193603660087862011-04-19T02:53:21.521+08:002011-04-19T02:53:21.521+08:00best! tetiba teringat masa zaman skola dulu plakbest! tetiba teringat masa zaman skola dulu plakAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14670865961637977896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-83841811571179206172011-04-18T20:24:32.205+08:002011-04-18T20:24:32.205+08:00Salam.jalan2 singgah sini..nice blog :)
Jom tengok...Salam.jalan2 singgah sini..nice blog :)<br />Jom tengok sakura dekat blog saya^^<br /><a href="http://frommetoyou85.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">http://frommetoyou85.blogspot.com/</a><br />Sudi2 jenguk ye (^____^)anumuchanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17027221804609986282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-32779599752963045652011-04-18T20:21:41.500+08:002011-04-18T20:21:41.500+08:00hehehe..jgnla semput zaty..eza pun suke menulis &a...hehehe..jgnla semput zaty..eza pun suke menulis & membaca novel juge.. usaha tangga kejayaan,yey! teruskan menulis!Ezahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09960729094533899377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-82993728576831655182011-04-18T17:21:56.134+08:002011-04-18T17:21:56.134+08:00@angkasa hi3.kalo bisa aq ceritain,pasti kamu ngak...@<a href="#c7717263916995323316" rel="nofollow">angkasa</a> hi3.kalo bisa aq ceritain,pasti kamu ngak akn percaya >.<zaty luvlianncezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-34113324599036991592011-04-18T17:13:37.790+08:002011-04-18T17:13:37.790+08:00@taio x asa gtu pn :P kui3@<a href="#c1951796046222750694" rel="nofollow">taio</a> x asa gtu pn :P kui3zaty luvlianncezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-4576218320572792482011-04-18T17:12:50.937+08:002011-04-18T17:12:50.937+08:00@Eza semput baca kumen nie.hehe.maceh.t dtg lg@<a href="#c5500264756171840778" rel="nofollow">Eza</a> semput baca kumen nie.hehe.maceh.t dtg lgzaty luvlianncezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-77172639169953233162011-04-18T13:12:08.779+08:002011-04-18T13:12:08.779+08:00aku nk komen byk2 pun ak bukan terer sgt..but nice...aku nk komen byk2 pun ak bukan terer sgt..but nice tried.mungkin hg leh msukkan lbh byk description.bru ak leh imagine cmna.heeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12194821990467083761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-55002647561718407782011-04-17T22:56:21.019+08:002011-04-17T22:56:21.019+08:00ok here goes my comments..
1)Jalan cerita ok for ...ok here goes my comments..<br /><br />1)Jalan cerita ok for beginner,boleh gilap lg but i suggest zaty bbkk je blog baru utk muatkan semua cerpen zaty...org yg suke bace cerpen mcm eza ni akan cari laman2 camni ;)<br /><br />2)berhati2 dgn ejaan..eza dpt kesan berbelas2 typo.sile cek semula ye zaty..even nama Fira pun ditaip sbg 'Mira'..cth lain typo 'kempali mengahadap','disanyangi',tyertahan'...ade lagila..triple cek ok :)<br /><br />3)Lagi,be careful dgn penggunaan bahasa bdk skrg...sng cerita bahasa sms la..takut terbawak-bawak dalam penulisan..kalau dialog takpe camtu..tapi if bercerita kene penuh ye...cth: time jadi tyme.<br /><br />Humor ade,jalan cerita ringan and bahasa telus..i dont regret reading this anyway... :) Keep up d good work! ini komen ikhlas dari eza...Ezahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09960729094533899377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-28168594599984237332011-04-17T21:26:21.191+08:002011-04-17T21:26:21.191+08:00@cik ayin tenx taw.nie yg semnagat nie:)@<a href="#c3920545249645857167" rel="nofollow">cik ayin</a> tenx taw.nie yg semnagat nie:)zaty luvlianncezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-39205452496458571672011-04-17T20:43:25.129+08:002011-04-17T20:43:25.129+08:00terbaek..!!
saya suka....keep it up...
terus...terbaek..!!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />saya suka....keep it up...<br />teruskan bercerpen :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-57559003643511195752011-04-17T15:58:06.435+08:002011-04-17T15:58:06.435+08:00@KHRLHSYM xperlu nk meminta maaf. sgt² memerlukan ...@<a href="#c6412158603183923860" rel="nofollow">KHRLHSYM</a> xperlu nk meminta maaf. sgt² memerlukan komen utk perbaiki cerpen zaty.tenxx. nanti dtg lg.komen yg ikhlas itu perlu :Dzaty luvlianncezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-12145608140125411442011-04-17T15:56:57.209+08:002011-04-17T15:56:57.209+08:00@fRaMe LenSeS ok.makaseh nadh. nnt kalo da zaty in...@<a href="#c8304010318804431217" rel="nofollow">fRaMe LenSeS</a> ok.makaseh nadh. nnt kalo da zaty inform g:Dzaty luvlianncezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-64121586031839238602011-04-17T15:33:31.824+08:002011-04-17T15:33:31.824+08:00hi zaty maaf lambat komen; hmm. kalau nak pandanga...hi zaty maaf lambat komen; hmm. kalau nak pandangan <br /><br />1. space antara perenggan-perenggan menampakkan cerita ini panjang. <br /><br />2. pengunaan bahasa inggeris dan bahasa melayu campus saya tak galakkan maaf =.=<br /><br />3. pengunaan perumpaan ada :)<br /><br />4. jalan cerita amat menarik; <br /><br />5. kalau boleh bahasa slanga dan campur itu dimuatkan di dalam dialog perbualan sahaja. <br /><br />maaf zaty ini pandangan ikhlas saya;.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01645080569319552736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-83040103188044312172011-04-17T15:32:09.912+08:002011-04-17T15:32:09.912+08:00cerita yang baik kamu. tapi kan, if u can rearrang...cerita yang baik kamu. tapi kan, if u can rearrange the sentence, would be much better, pandangan peribadi la. dia terlalu jauh. dan nampak semak plak. buat jadi panjang sangat.. <br /><br />dari segi cerita, memang terbaik. kamu berbakat.. nadh suka.. jgn lp invite biila ada lagi hasil2 karya hebat seperti ni untuk tatapan ya.. ;)fRaMe+LenSeShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14605647328421222609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-4553675017164311222011-04-17T14:58:30.636+08:002011-04-17T14:58:30.636+08:00@Cikgu Den tenx cgu den..happy nie.moga² owg len g...@<a href="#c2916941953345859984" rel="nofollow">Cikgu Den</a> tenx cgu den..happy nie.moga² owg len gk akan suke :)zaty luvlianncezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-51524952911454042782011-04-17T14:57:41.818+08:002011-04-17T14:57:41.818+08:00@Miecyber hi3.panjang sgt ke abg mie.xpe².nnt try ...@<a href="#c8344349662399057724" rel="nofollow">Miecyber</a> hi3.panjang sgt ke abg mie.xpe².nnt try pendekkan sket.makaseh sudi baca :Dzaty luvlianncezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01160527710127205355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-29169419533458599842011-04-17T14:53:49.906+08:002011-04-17T14:53:49.906+08:00jalan cerita menarik. tersusun. ditambah dengan un...jalan cerita menarik. tersusun. ditambah dengan unsur2 humor. pembaca rasa terhibur. unsur2 emosi membuatkan pembaca terus setia untuk membaca sampai habis. ada bakat menulis. all the best.<br /><br /><a href="http://www.cikguden.com/2011/04/saysmy-3rd-anniversary-birthday.html" rel="nofollow">SAYS.my 3rd anniversary birthday giveaway</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-544856321813637810.post-83443496623990577242011-04-17T13:59:45.702+08:002011-04-17T13:59:45.702+08:00Abg Mie rasa panjanglah cerpen ni.Kalau panjang ma...Abg Mie rasa panjanglah cerpen ni.Kalau panjang macam nie elok pecahkan dan posting kan by atau mengikut episod..<br /><br />Pembaca akan teruja untuk menanti next entri @ episod.<br /><br />Tapi jalan cerita menarik dan ada bakat menjadi penulis..<br /><br />Tapi elok dapatkan pendapat blogger lain juga. yer<br /><br />Ganbanttee nee...:D<br /><br /><a href="http://www.miecyber.com/2011/04/6-bom-tangan-di-temui-di-brickfields.html" rel="nofollow">6 Bom Tangan di temui di Brickfields </a>Miecyberhttp://www.miecyber.comnoreply@blogger.com